Customers can tell it was translated.
Your product is fine. The page reads like it went through a translation tool, and shoppers notice. They hesitate, they open a new tab, they check reviews somewhere else.
I rewrite English product pages for small Shopify and independent store owners, so the copy sounds like it was written by someone who sells the product. I also look at the page as a whole: what a buyer sees first, what makes them trust you, which questions stop them, and whether the button tells them what happens next.
Option 1: Product page rewrite
For one product page that needs to read like native English.
- A rewritten product page: headline, short intro, benefit points, specs written for buyers, and the CTA text
- Trust section copy: shipping, returns, warranty and payment wording, based on the policies you actually have
- An FAQ block with 5 to 8 questions buyers are likely to ask before they pay
- A side by side doc showing your current text and the new text, with a one line reason for each change
Delivery: TBD business days after I receive your page link and product details. Revisions: TBD rounds. Price: TBD.
Option 2: Landing page review + tracking check + A/B test plan
For a store that gets visitors but not enough orders, and wants to know where people drop off.
- Everything in Option 1, for one key page
- A written landing page review: first screen, product copy, trust signals, FAQ, CTA placement, mobile layout and page speed notes, ranked by what to fix first
- A GA4 tracking check: whether page views, add to cart, begin checkout and purchase events are firing, plus a short list of what is missing or counted twice. I need view access to your GA4 property for this. I do not ask for passwords.
- An A/B test plan for one change: what to test, the version A and version B copy, which metric decides the winner, and roughly how much traffic it needs before you can trust the result
Delivery: TBD business days after access and materials are ready. Revisions: TBD rounds on the copy. Price: TBD.
For the kind of review you'd get, see my practice reviews of Cotopaxi and Parachute. These are unofficial. I did them on my own, using public pages; neither brand asked for them or is connected to this service.
What does a rewrite look like?
Example only. I made up this product and both versions to show the kind of change. It isn't a client page.
| Before (example) | After (example) |
|---|---|
| 2026 New Ceramic Flower Pot Plant Pot Indoor Outdoor Garden Home Decor Big Size | Matte Ceramic Planter with Drainage Hole, 20 cm |
| Use high quality ceramic, very strong and not easy broken, give your plant a good home. | Made from thick-walled ceramic, so it won't crack when you move it around the house. |
| Bottom have hole, water can go out, plant root will not rotten. | A drainage hole in the base lets extra water out, which helps keep roots from sitting in water. |
| Simple design suitable for many style, good gift choice for friend and family. | A plain, matte finish that sits well on a shelf or windowsill. Easy to give as a housewarming gift. |
What I can't promise
I won't promise a specific lift in conversion rate. Results depend on your traffic, prices and product, and nobody honest can give you a number before testing. What I can promise is clear reasoning for every change, so you can judge it and test it.
Categories I don't take
I don't work on pages for phones, phone accessories, audio products or other consumer electronics. I also skip health, finance and legal products.
How to order
- Send me your page link and a few lines about the product and your customers: lizehao.lemon@gmail.com
- I reply with a quote and a delivery date.
- Once you agree, I send a PayPal invoice. You can pay by card without a PayPal account.
- Work starts when the invoice is paid.
See the refund policy (draft).
Using your project as a case study
I'd like to show some projects in my portfolio. I only do that if you say yes in writing. Before anything goes public:
- Your store name, brand, product names and any customer details are removed unless you ask me to keep them.
- Any numbers are shown as relative changes or ranges, never your raw revenue or order counts.
- You see the case study before it's published and can ask me to change it or take it down.
Saying no doesn't change the price or the service.
Questions
Will this raise my conversion rate by a set amount?
No. I won't promise a specific lift. Results depend on your traffic, prices and product, and nobody honest can give you a number before testing. What I can promise is clear reasoning for every change, so you can judge it and test it.
Do you need my passwords?
No. For the GA4 check I only need view access to your GA4 property.
Which products do you not take?
Phones, phone accessories, audio products and other consumer electronics. I also skip health, finance and legal products.
How do I pay?
I send a PayPal invoice after you agree to the quote. You can pay by card without a PayPal account. There is no checkout on this site.